Rydia

No problem! :)

Yes, that does and if you can make it come across in the story more, I think that would make for a really interesting character. You need to be careful ...

Thanks Wildcat! Yes, Toby is thinking of jumping off the hospital roof and thanks for the punctuation feedback, I'll take a close look at it and re-think! Thanks again, I'm ...

That's a great incentive, now I HAVE to write it xD

Haha, in that case I'm impressed! I can never get anything right on my phone, it's a nightmare. And I'm glad it helped!

xD Maybe you saw it when I did NaPo? I've not had it in the forums long, but I did post it on my NaPo thread back in April. And ...

Thanks wonder, I'm glad it made you smile! I'm thinking of working on a short collection of 'feel good' poems or poems for children and this would definitely go in ...

No problem and I'm glad it helped cheer you up! :)

Thank you! I can't take all credit for the rhythm as it's actually a poetic form called the double dactyl, you should give it a try and see how it ...

Thank you very much! Everyone keeps pointing out those last two lines so maybe I'll take another look, but I'm really glad you liked it! :D

Thank you Hannah and I think there's quite a bit of luck involved, certainly less talent, more luck, yep yep! Good catch on the 'Sat' - I had all first ...

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Thank you so much for the kind words Jonathan! I think I still have a long way to go before I reach the level of the great poets, but I'm ...

Thank you! I have to admit, this was one of my favourites to write and, though I didn't use it in any of my final projects, I'm very fond of ...

Thank you! I did enjoy writing it and it did come naturally, I think that rhythmic poems are much easier to write :D A series about different animals sounds like ...