Rydia

Hi, so thought I'd give you a few comments on this. I'll try to only be positive and constructive since that seems to be what you want, though I feel ...

Hi, thought I'd drop by and review this :) Specifics 1. If he uses Anderson as his name, then have him tell us he's Anderson. You can give his full ...

Haiiiii :D Specifics 1. In his left hand was something that looked like a grey flashlight glowing with a faint purple light. I've picked this out as an example of ...

Haaaiiiii! Specifics The Quote: I like this. I don't often agree with starting a poem off with a quote but this one is well chosen and works as a kind ...

Hi, here to review! :) Line-By-Line Stanza One: Some of your lines are very awkward! There doesn't seem to be a working rhythm (7, 6, 6, 6) and it's not ...

Hi! Here I am to review :) Specifics 1. Title. Alright so the title is a little ordinary which isn't bad in itself because plenty of people will be drawn ...

Hi again! I thought I'd drop by and review this for you :) Specifics 1. Four girls were lying like crime scene bodies in a pink bedroom. I love this ...

Hello dear! Sorry it's taken me absolutely forever to get to this but I'm finally a bit more settled after my holiday so review here I come! Specifics 1. I ...

Hi! Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this, had a crazy few days! Specifics Title: Alright so I'm not sure that '24' as a title would entice ...

Hi, this was looking lonely so I decided I'd write you a review :) You're off in a couple of places with the rhythm or you have strange phrasing that ...

Hi! Okay to be honest, I read the title of this and started reading it and I didn't think I'd like it. I've read a lot of things today and ...

Hi! Okay so I'm just going to review this from the top and then, if anything occurs to me from the earlier version, I might comment on it or I ...

Haiiii, only me again. 1. I'm not as sure about this first sentence. It's not as strong, though I do like how it relates back to the previous one. 2. ...

You remember me and you know how these things go down. I talk at you, you listen and somewhere along the way writing takes place. Specifics 1. Your first sentence ...

Perhaps you'll never see this as I notice you made very few posts around the site and are very new but on the off chance you do, I felt I ...