Rydia

Hi! So you said I should choose any of your recent works and then I came across this one and it grabbed my attention, partly for the title and partly ...

Hi Jack! I'm here, though I'm not sure this can be called a review. More 'comments' if I may. Title: The title is perfect. It grabbed my attention immediately and ...

Hello my darling! Okay so I might have cheated and moved you up a few places on my review list but shhhhh. I won't tell if you won't ;) I ...

Hi Tails! Alright so there's some really good imagery going on but I'm not sure about your flow in a couple of places so let's take a closer look, shall ...

Hi! So I just had a quick skim through the reviews below as I don't want to be too repetetive and I have to say, Karzkin has really hit the ...

Hi! Sorry about the delya, been a bit busy lately but here I am :) Specifics 1. Title: Just wanted to say I really like the title, it's attention grabbing ...

Hi! Alright so you have some very powerful images here but there's a lot I'm not sure about, mostly your flow. I'll try to point out what I can and ...

Hi! Sorry its taken me forever to get to this, I've had a few unexpected interruptions. But hopefully the review will be worth the wait :) Specifics 1. The wretched ...

Hi! Alright so I'm very excited about this and I shall make great efforts to be neutral in my review (but I think we both know that won't work out) ...

Hi again! Specifics 1. It seems strange to me that people are yelling across a coffee house. I don't know if that happens a lot where you are but generally ...

Hi, looks like you could use a review ^^ Lines One Through Five: The first line needs work. I was almost ready to skip over this and look for something ...

Alright, not sure if I'll get this done today, but thought I'd make a start of it ^^ Specifics 1. You should always have a space after an ellipsis and ...

Hi, here as requested :) Specifics 1. The names. Okay so you have a key which help a little, but there isn't really a place for those in novels and ...

Alright so this grabbed my attention, but only because I saw that first line on the front page. You need a better title, dear. Or one at all would be ...

Haiiiii! Specifics 1. I agree with DudeMcGuy that you don't want 'down low' in that first paragraph, though I'd suggest keeping down instead of low. I also agree on using ...