Rydia

Hi! So I've decided I'm going to write a review for each of my SB crew-mates as I don't give you guys nearly enough time and things like storybooks and ...

Hi! So I've been meaning to check in with you for a while and the rest of the SB crew and just not getting around to it because there's always ...

Hi again! Specifics 1. I'm not sure the 'though' fits in the second line as the words bubbling to the surface isn't really a contradiction. For someone drowning in thoughts, ...

Hi! I thought I'd take a look at some of your poems, hope that's okay :) Specifics 1. I like the first two lines a lot but I think the ...

Specifics 1. I love the first line - it immediately pulls the reader into the poem and makes them want to read the next. 2. I'm not sure 'forms' is ...

Hi Holy, thought I'd take a look at this! Specifics 1. The first line isn't the strongest introduction. I think it's because it doesn't have a poetical flow and instead ...

I'm on a train so I can't listen to the audio unfortunately. I'll try to give feedback on the flow and word choices though. Specifics 1. every other day I ...

Hi, I thought I'd take a look at this. I'll give my first thoughts as I read through and then try to summarise a bit more at the end. Specifics ...

I should still be in bed and I'm only up because I'm not yet rich so I thought I'd save money and get the early train to my parent's. Buuut ...

Specifics 1. “My knives!” I'm not sure if this is an appropriate thing to worry about? Crystals I understand could be at risk at breaking but knives doesn't have quite ...

Okay we're trying the commute to work today because I don't feel like doing ITIL studying and I have a feeling I'll need to go to the shops at lunch ...

Okay my lunch break is all over the place today so I'll have to try and make this a quick one but I'll aim to give you more overall feedback ...

What on Earth am I going to review once I run out of chapters of this? You need to get some more posted so I don't have to worry about ...

Specifics 1. “Edna,” Benjamin had said, clutching his hair like he was about to pull it out, “please, let’s just go, the frames are busted up and they’re not going ...

Specifics 1. Methodius was still comatose, Clem still muttering, and Edna’s thoughts rattled around her brain, rolling from one side to the other like cargo in ship trapped in a ...