Rydia

Hi there! So I thought I'd give you a few words on this and I do mean a few words as I'm always self-conscious when the review is double the ...

Hello dear! One review deserves another, da? Plus after reading this I couldn't resist so you're getting one, no objections accepted ;) Specifics 1. I love the half rhymes you've ...

Hello darling! So because I am sick and not up for doing much of anything, I thought I'd come and give you a review. But remember that I am sick ...

Hi neva! I haven't read the comments below so please forgive me if I repeat anything, but at least you know if you're hearing the same thing twice, it's probably ...

Hi there! First off, I have very mixed feelings about this poem; there was a moment in the middle there where I wasn't sure if I'd finish reading it and ...

Hi there! Okay so I think you need to build on a few of the images you have here as I don't get much of a sense of what the ...

Haiiii! Okay so I haven't reviewed in ages which means you'll have to forgive me if I'm a tad rusty but it's time I got into the swing of things ...

Hi there! Alright so I said I'd review this forever ago and I'm terribly sorry for taking so long. I honestly didn't think my new job would steal so much ...

Hi! Here I am at last to review, apologies for the delay ^^ Specifics 1. “No they aren’t, and even if they did, I don’t care, we’re in the country ...

Sorry about the delay! Here's your review :) Specifics Stanza One: As far as first lines go, yours is a little dull. First lines are important because sometimes that's all ...

Hi! Sorry this has taken me forever to get to - I didn't realise the Writing Olympics would keep me so busy! But here you go: Specifics here I am ...

Specifics 1. In your first paragraph, you move from the she to the he too quickly and catch the reader off guard. Describe her more first. How does she lay, ...

Hi! Oooh so now we have an earlier section, very good. Specifics 1. I pulled out my chair and sat down, reaching for the cup of tea Effie had already ...

Hi! Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this but here I am now :) Specifics 1. Good first sentence. It grabs the reader's attention and works as ...

Hi! Here to review as requested :) Title: It's simple, tells you what the theme is and it works. But it could be better. Perhaps 'No Replacements' would be more ...