Rydia

Howdy! I decided I'd review my favourite of your three poems because I think we learn the most from having our best work criticised. Specifics 1. I love the first ...

Hullo! So this is late and you have every right to give me 0 points, I just wanted to point that out first in case time differences and you don't ...

Hi! So I thought I'd go with something semi recent and this one caught my eye :) Line-By-Line 1. Normally I'm always telling people to be specific and to avoid ...

Hi megsug! Okay so this time I know I've read part of this before, see! Totally remembering these characters. In fact, I got curious and it turns out the chapters ...

Hello! I think I've read a couple of chapters of this but not for a while. Anyway, if I say something which you think you've already covered, then don't worry ...

Did you miss me? I'm sure you didn't but I'm back anyway. Haven't read all the previous chapters so if I say anything you've already covered, you can feel free ...

Hola! I'm sure I don't have to tell you that I've not read the previous chapters, but if I do point something out which you think you've already covered, then ...

Hey, I figured I'd review an actual chapter next :) I've not read the prologue or chapter one so if I point out something you think you've already covered earlier, ...

Here to review :D If I point out anything which you think you've covered in an earlier chapter then feel free to ignore it as I'm coming in a bit ...

Hello there! First, just an observation, but you may not need a latin glossary unless you're planning to use a lot of latin words? If you're a couple of chapters ...

Hello! So I've read parts of this before, but not quite enough to have a full grip on your characters/ settings so if I point out something you've covered before, ...

Hello there! I've not read the earlier chapters so if I point out anything which you feel you've already covered, please feel free to ignore. Specifics 1. Two long tables, ...

Hullo, thought I'd stop by and take a look at this. I've not read the previous chapters so if I say something you think you've already covered, please feel free ...

Firstly, go wash more dishes. Secondly, I suppose I'll take a look at this ;) Specifics 1. I'm not sure if you were using wonder on purpose in the first ...

You know the drill by now ;) Specifics 1. “Probably?” someone echoed. Her mind told her it was Tyranos. Be a little more specific here - her memory told her ...