Rydia

Next part! Specifics 1. Luckily, everyone in the room was too busy to turn round and notice their captain, so Chip was able to press the button that closed the ...

Here I am for the first chapter! I'll make a few line-by-line comments as I read through and then give a few general ideas/ summary at the end and every ...

Hi! So the format of this is interesting but after a first read through I'm not sure what it's doing, whether the two sides of the page are different speakers ...

Lumichu, I love you! Even if I can't copy and paste your poetry lines for my line-by-line :P Specifics 1. I want the comma in the first line to be ...

Okay it looks like the new aim is one review a day, let's see if I can stick to that! Specifics 1. I find it odd that Evie is sat ...

Hi again! Specifics 1. She always chose Michael because he looked the most like Caius, or so they told her at Dial-a-bite when she went to their building and showed ...

So much for two a day, I'm already failing at my goal. Perhaps I need to review one chapter of this and then something shorter to fit them in. Anyway! ...

Hi again!I decided it's about time I got back to reviewing regularly so I'm going to aim for two a day and I figured going back to the start on ...

I should go to bed buuuut I got the green room review afterall and there's only 45 minutes left and it would be such a shame if my team lost ...

I figured I'll do one more review before I go to bed. I don't expect this will still be in the green room by the time I finish writing this ...

Hi, thought I'd drop by and give you a review on this. I've not read the other chapters so be sure to take my comments with a pinch of salt ...

Hi, thought I'd take a look at this! I've not read any of the previous parts so if you feel like I mention something which you've covered in another chapter, ...

Hi, thought I'd take a look at this. I've not read any of the previous parts so if I mention something which you think you've already covered in an earlier ...

Hi! I saw 'chosen grandma' and 'Philostratus' and decided I'm in the mood for something vaguely ridiculous and I hope this is as silly as I'm anticipating ;) Specifics 1. ...

Hi! So I really like a lot of the imagery in this poem but I think it's hard to find the context and feels a little too metaphorical/ doesn't quite ...