Ruth

Hey! I really like the idea behind this. I hate the attitudes people have toward the homeless, that they're all drunks and so on, and this is an effective way ...

Hi! I'm Grin, and I shall be your reviewer for today. I see you're new to YWS - why not drop in at the Welcome Mate and introduce yourself? :D ...

I can honestly say I've never read anything quite like this. Writing from the point of view of a fridge was a stroke of genius, and I love the character ...

I love the idea that our behaviour is partly determined by our genes. I've always been thought that it's mostly the environment, but I do think genetics have a role ...

Wow, that's... different. In a good way, because the tone is so unique. Mostly bitter, but at the same time there's something behind that. Regret, I think. I'd love to ...

Hi there! This is an interesting concept, and you've left me wanting to know more. There was something about the metric rhythm that struck me, though... Metric rhythm is made ...

Hey! Okay, you've clearly worked very hard on this. It's not bad at all, and I rather enjoyed it, but there are a couple of things you might want to ...

Hey! Okay, the first time I scanned through this, I wasn't all that impressed, if I'm being honest. The rhyme seemed far too forced, and I was struggling for something ...

Hey! The first thing that struck me when I read this was the format. This doesn't look much like a poem; this might be the wrong place for you to ...

Hey! Okay, I liked this. The ending concept was very effective, and you've really put a lot of effort into creating a scene which your reader can imagine. And you've ...

Hi! Okay, you've picked a great theme here. Most, if not all readers can really relate to it, and as a consequence you don't have to work quite as hard ...

Hey! Okay, the first thing that struck me as the page loaded was the presentation. The central alignment kind of threw me off here, and I didn't see any significant ...

Hi, FeatherBlue. Welcome to YWS! If there's anything you need, you can feel free to PM me, I'll be happy to help you out. Okay, you have a nice concept ...

Hi! I hate to say it, but what I thought when I read through this was "Twilight". It's an over-used concept, and frankly, there's very little to it. What you ...

Hi! Okay, this hit hard with a very powerful ending. But it's building up to the ending that breaks the story a little. 1. Grammar. It's not as good as ...