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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Walk To Remember

    Hey! I won't go into the spelling/grammar schtick, since although that was my main nitpick it's mostly fairly obvious. However! Mary paused to let Sara nod; her head moving like ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Opening The Drawer

    Hello there! I see that you’re new to YWS; welcome! If you’re interested in getting to know your way around and meet some of our members, why not drop in ...

    May 20, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fear

    Hey there! I see you're new to YWS, so welcome! If you're interested in meeting some of our members and getting your name out there, a good place to start ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Inspiration and Writer's Block

    Hey there! So, this was a fun piece. You drew me in with a title consisting of two things most of us here have experienced plenty of times, and your ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Story I Can't Say

    Hey! Okay, to begin with, this seems quite an original way of telling a story, and I was intrigued by it, if a little confused at first. I want to ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: nothing

    Hey! I know you haven't gotten a lot of reviews, but I thought this was fantastic. It's just so... bizarre, I guess is the nearest word. It's strangely comical, for ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unity

    Hey there! Dropping in for my review as requested, so here's hoping I can say something helpful. :) By the way, I'm guessing from this that you're a Christian? If ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A name that means traveler: Prologue *edited*

    Hey there! Here as requested to do whatever I can. :D Okay. Well, first things first, you're setting up a fascinating plot here. I'm very interested to see where it ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wyvern (EDIT)

    Hey there! I really enjoyed this. It's completely out of my comfort zone for reviewing and nearly as much for reading, but you kept my attention throughout and I was ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: This post has been deleted.

    Hey Erynn! Nice to meet you :) I see you're new to YWS. Why not drop in at the Welcome Mat to introduce yourself and meet some of our members? ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: ---

    Hi! This was an... interesting poem. It wasn't exactly uplifting, but it caught and held my attention. I've never read Brave New World, so I can't really see it from ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Mercedes' Revolution (Pt. 1)

    Hey! Okay, you have the beginnings of a really good story here. I'm quite interested to see what happens next, even though this isn't the sort of thing I'm used ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Deleted

    That was... rather chilling. Your repetition of adjectives in relation to characters took a minute for me to get the hang of it, but it worked very well. It was ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chrysanthemum Eyes

    Hey, Coral! Okay: This is a lovely poem. I like the ideas and imagery you have here, and the general theme of the poem works really well with the way ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Fall

    Hey! I'm Grin, and I shall be your reviewer for today. Okay, I like this. It definitely has a Christmassy feel to it, and there is some lovely imagery to ...

    Dec 15, 2010


Poetry is the art of creating imaginary gardens with real toads.
— Marianne Moore