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Re: Walk To Remember
Hey! I won't go into the spelling/grammar schtick, since although that was my main nitpick it's mostly fairly obvious. However! Mary paused to let Sara nod; her head moving like ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Opening The Drawer
Hello there! I see that you’re new to YWS; welcome! If you’re interested in getting to know your way around and meet some of our members, why not drop in ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Fear
Hey there! I see you're new to YWS, so welcome! If you're interested in meeting some of our members and getting your name out there, a good place to start ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration and Writer's Block
Hey there! So, this was a fun piece. You drew me in with a title consisting of two things most of us here have experienced plenty of times, and your ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: The Story I Can't Say
Hey! Okay, to begin with, this seems quite an original way of telling a story, and I was intrigued by it, if a little confused at first. I want to ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: nothing
Hey! I know you haven't gotten a lot of reviews, but I thought this was fantastic. It's just so... bizarre, I guess is the nearest word. It's strangely comical, for ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Unity
Hey there! Dropping in for my review as requested, so here's hoping I can say something helpful. :) By the way, I'm guessing from this that you're a Christian? If ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: A name that means traveler: Prologue *edited*
Hey there! Here as requested to do whatever I can. :D Okay. Well, first things first, you're setting up a fascinating plot here. I'm very interested to see where it ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Wyvern (EDIT)
Hey there! I really enjoyed this. It's completely out of my comfort zone for reviewing and nearly as much for reading, but you kept my attention throughout and I was ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: This post has been deleted.
Hey Erynn! Nice to meet you :) I see you're new to YWS. Why not drop in at the Welcome Mat to introduce yourself and meet some of our members? ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: ---
Hi! This was an... interesting poem. It wasn't exactly uplifting, but it caught and held my attention. I've never read Brave New World, so I can't really see it from ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Mercedes' Revolution (Pt. 1)
Hey! Okay, you have the beginnings of a really good story here. I'm quite interested to see what happens next, even though this isn't the sort of thing I'm used ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
That was... rather chilling. Your repetition of adjectives in relation to characters took a minute for me to get the hang of it, but it worked very well. It was ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Chrysanthemum Eyes
Hey, Coral! Okay: This is a lovely poem. I like the ideas and imagery you have here, and the general theme of the poem works really well with the way ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: The Fall
Hey! I'm Grin, and I shall be your reviewer for today. Okay, I like this. It definitely has a Christmassy feel to it, and there is some lovely imagery to ...
Dec 15, 2010
