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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Walk To Remember

    Hey! I won't go into the spelling/grammar schtick, since although that was my main nitpick it's mostly fairly obvious. However! Mary paused to let Sara nod; her head moving like ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Opening The Drawer

    Hello there! I see that you’re new to YWS; welcome! If you’re interested in getting to know your way around and meet some of our members, why not drop in ...

    May 20, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fear

    Hey there! I see you're new to YWS, so welcome! If you're interested in meeting some of our members and getting your name out there, a good place to start ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Inspiration and Writer's Block

    Hey there! So, this was a fun piece. You drew me in with a title consisting of two things most of us here have experienced plenty of times, and your ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Story I Can't Say

    Hey! Okay, to begin with, this seems quite an original way of telling a story, and I was intrigued by it, if a little confused at first. I want to ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: nothing

    Hey! I know you haven't gotten a lot of reviews, but I thought this was fantastic. It's just so... bizarre, I guess is the nearest word. It's strangely comical, for ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unity

    Hey there! Dropping in for my review as requested, so here's hoping I can say something helpful. :) By the way, I'm guessing from this that you're a Christian? If ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A name that means traveler: Prologue *edited*

    Hey there! Here as requested to do whatever I can. :D Okay. Well, first things first, you're setting up a fascinating plot here. I'm very interested to see where it ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wyvern (EDIT)

    Hey there! I really enjoyed this. It's completely out of my comfort zone for reviewing and nearly as much for reading, but you kept my attention throughout and I was ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: This post has been deleted.

    Hey Erynn! Nice to meet you :) I see you're new to YWS. Why not drop in at the Welcome Mat to introduce yourself and meet some of our members? ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: ---

    Hi! This was an... interesting poem. It wasn't exactly uplifting, but it caught and held my attention. I've never read Brave New World, so I can't really see it from ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Mercedes' Revolution (Pt. 1)

    Hey! Okay, you have the beginnings of a really good story here. I'm quite interested to see what happens next, even though this isn't the sort of thing I'm used ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Deleted

    That was... rather chilling. Your repetition of adjectives in relation to characters took a minute for me to get the hang of it, but it worked very well. It was ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chrysanthemum Eyes

    Hey, Coral! Okay: This is a lovely poem. I like the ideas and imagery you have here, and the general theme of the poem works really well with the way ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Fall

    Hey! I'm Grin, and I shall be your reviewer for today. Okay, I like this. It definitely has a Christmassy feel to it, and there is some lovely imagery to ...

    Dec 15, 2010


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners