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Re: Oreos
This is awesome! I love it! Oreos shall rule the world! ......
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: The questions of life
I love this. It is so simple, yet so powerful. But what happens when the day turns to night? That's my question.
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: I think I'm in love (with the rain)
Its really good, I see this peom as a lover dancing in the rain. I think you should have not put sentences in () but that you're choice. Its really ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Dance of the Lone Spirit
I really enjoyec this. I wish you would have described him more though. I think its really good overall, and it makes me want to be in the forest with ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 4 - Angels
I think its really good. Though I think you used stared one to many times. Maybe use glared, glanced, watched.
Apr 4, 2013