Rune

Wow, this is really good in a scary sort of way. I love the imagery, and how you portray an emo's life from his/her point of view. I only hvae ...

Hi Harshi :) You have an almost well written piece overall but there are three things you can do to make it better. Although I get that the variations of ...

I'm never going to be able to compete, you seem to be churning out good poems every other day. Give me a moment *nitpick scanner on....* Nope, nothing all I ...

Hi Aki :) Brilliant poem, and I have to nitpick to criticize it. Most of the reviewers have already done a good job of it. I found this verse a ...

Before I begin to review, please forgive me for what I'm about to say. Thank God for the P.S. I was started losing the will to live after reading the ...

You certainly have a lot of conflict this makes it a good piece, I could see it happening after the first few words. But your writing is limited by the ...

Hi Kafka :) Before I start I just want to say that I haven't read the other reviews so forgive me if I am redundant also if I am over-critical. ...

That was fascinating, but I really don't know what to make of it. I thought it was brilliant, but on the other hand it came as sort of a shock ...

Normally I like to give a lot of praise to stories that merit it, but yours left me with one word (and that is a good thing): chilling. The way ...

This is a really good piece and I hope you keep it up. The story flows very well and the characters intrigue me. The only way I can find anything ...

To short. But the short bit was VERY good. It would have helped if you had put in some more description of Neri and I'm sure you'll do good job ...

Ok umm... I really don't mean to offend you or anything, but it isn't really that well written. I usually go through a review taking a few sentences that need ...

Well I'm not sure about the last one, probably because I didn't get it but the other two are OK. The first one is slightly off at the first line ...

On the whole it is good, but i think it needs rearranging. The beginning of the poem is like some kind of prologue. I was expecting the whole thing to ...

It is still very good, and a lot funnier than the last one, but you went a little bit overboard with the wordiness in some parts of the story. There ...