Runawaythoughts

I LOVE THIS STORY! I normally think that historical fiction is kind of boring but this is great. I don't get why he's wearing a dress but i love the ...

I liked it. But it end really quick. Maybe you could add a little more or do you just like sirius. It was quite quick. Sorry but i cant get ...

Is Anstra supposed to be God? And is this church in heaven? And why wouldnt angels be angels in heaven? If i'm wrong sorry about this post then. Good luck ...

SPACES PEOPLE SPACES!!! ouch... ok could of things. You need to CAPITALIZE the first Letter of every sentence. That really bugged me secondly. (I'm not but i know a few) ...

I thought it was really interesting. Hovever the whole boy sells soul to the devil for a loved one, has been used to many times. I liked how you wrote ...

HAHA i find this hilarious. I don't agree with it all but i find it quite funny. Why would you want to post it on young writers society? I have ...

I like your idea, and this is written well. Except you changed tenses. Other than that I think you have something really good started. Good luck! I agree completely with ...

1rst off you need to work on voice. You need to choose a time period, or create one, and make your characters thoughts reflect that. 2nd, Details Darling! You have ...

Sorry couldn't finish reading i have to get to bed. Few things. Mom is scared shit of M. When we were at red light M flicked a book at Mom. ...

1rst off, I like the thought process, disepearing people, undercover space statoins, but wasting it all on a place for suspeneded students, COME ON! This must be a fake right, ...

Just a tip, first person usually isn't used in this sort of genre of English well. Maybe a diary or something would be a different thing but this doesn't work. ...