Rumi

This is really nice, actually just the sort of thing I needed to hear right now! I like how it's structured with an intro and outro in addition to the ...

This is really nice, it has so much rhythm packed into one short sentence. The short words and repeated lines drive it forward and make it seem like the poem ...

I really like the main image of pressing your nose against the glass, that's a vivid way to get the listener to feel that exclusion. I wonder if you even ...

This is nice, I like how you convey your passion for writing and compare it to singing. At the end, when you say "you must know that you're now mine", ...

This is funny! I like the quick, driving rhythm in the lines. The lines don't have too many syllables, so it propels you forward, which fits it being an urgent ...