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Rubz

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Sparks and Rushes to the Head

    You are beyond brilliant. I haven't been so drawn in to a piece of writing in so long! because stairs like a spine can only take so much mud from ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Dear Friend

    This is a great poem that I can definitely relate to. I like that it was sad but still full of confidence that this friendship could make it through the ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Dancers

    I don't even know what to say, this poem is absolutely beautiful! As I was reading I found myself longing to be one of those dancers. I imagined them to ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Embrace

    Wow! As I was reading this I became more and more curious and couldn't stop! I really like the element of mystery that you used as well ;) I love ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Colours

    This poem was full of imagery I could see every scene you painted with your words! I personally don't like to read my work over because I keep changing it, ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Five Months

    This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Memories

    I really like this poem. I feel like it's along the lines of the statement "I don't love you, I love who you used to be." & I'm sure there ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Peeled Naked

    "I would not thaw your formwith wordless meaning, not with shapes unlike your own; I would lead you out into the sun,to melt each evening." Wow! I am realllyy impressed! ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Friends everywhere

    This is a beautiful poem! I recently seperated from all my best friends and my family so I definitely know what you're going through, just don't ever forget that everything ...

    Jul 3, 2011


The moral of Snow White is never eat apples.
— Lemony Snicket