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Re: Sparks and Rushes to the Head
You are beyond brilliant. I haven't been so drawn in to a piece of writing in so long! because stairs like a spine can only take so much mud from ...
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Re: Dear Friend
This is a great poem that I can definitely relate to. I like that it was sad but still full of confidence that this friendship could make it through the ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Dancers
I don't even know what to say, this poem is absolutely beautiful! As I was reading I found myself longing to be one of those dancers. I imagined them to ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Embrace
Wow! As I was reading this I became more and more curious and couldn't stop! I really like the element of mystery that you used as well ;) I love ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: The Colours
This poem was full of imagery I could see every scene you painted with your words! I personally don't like to read my work over because I keep changing it, ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Five Months
This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed ...
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Re: Memories
I really like this poem. I feel like it's along the lines of the statement "I don't love you, I love who you used to be." & I'm sure there ...
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Re: Peeled Naked
"I would not thaw your formwith wordless meaning, not with shapes unlike your own; I would lead you out into the sun,to melt each evening." Wow! I am realllyy impressed! ...
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Re: Friends everywhere
This is a beautiful poem! I recently seperated from all my best friends and my family so I definitely know what you're going through, just don't ever forget that everything ...
Jul 3, 2011
