RubyRed

You're welcome Snaz. :D

Ah okay. >.< You're welcome I hope my review helped! :D

Okay, I will try to make this better. Thank you for your review! :D

Thanks for your review. And yes I do believe I spelt torture wrong.

Hello guys, I have made tons of corrections. xD I hope that this is better now. Also I added some description and I took away some of the choppy sentences. ...

Thanks Kanome.

Oh wow, oh my gosh thank you so much. I really do need to work on this. :P Thanks for your helpful review. >.

Yeah, I guess that wasn't necessary. =D xD >.

Thank you. :D

You're welcome. :P

Hello Link, Nunya is here have no fear! Just kidding... >.> I have no criticism for this so I think I'll attempt to try your riddle. "Eyes stare at you; ...

Hello Link, I very much enjoyed this poem. I would have to say I found it quite funny. I just I have say maybe it would be better if you ...

Thanks I'm glad you liked my poem. :)

Thank you very much.

Thanks for the tips. It does have a flow problem, I not sure what to do there though.