RubyRed

Thank you so much for your review Lavvie and don't forget to click the "like" bottom if you actually did. I'm still very new to writing so this was very ...

Thank you for your time. I'll try to make this clearer. God bless

Thanks again for your review. I really don't know what to do with this one. Lol God bless, I will try to make this more clear

Hey, thank you so much for your review I really appreciate it! I do have a problem with silly bulls... :P and I try to make things fit as best ...

I meant His disciples chooses but I guess I should make it clear. Thanks for the amazing review Snazz Pizzazz :D

Yeah, YWS loves to mess with my format. Just fixed that btw hope that helps and I will spend time to see if I can make it more original but ...

Thanks for your review. This poem was tricky to write but your points are all valid I'll see what I can do to help myself out here.

Nuh uh. My nana said her sister made it up

You're welcome.

I asked why they were mean to him.

Cool!

Maybe in your book but I'm still in school and my teacher takes away points if I don't capitalize the first word in every stanza of poetry so yeah it ...

Don't apologize! I probably wasn't clear enough. So excited to read more.

Thanks for the review. I actually posted this a long time ago and I can't remember if I fixed the problems. And I had italicized the thoughts but for some ...

Okay thanks. I'll take a look.