RubyRed

Hey! Nice poem I like the length and style of this. Some tips though that would make your poem look more professional would be capitalize "Lord" and though some people ...

Hey happiestwr1t1ng23, nice poem I would say this deserves five stars not only for a job when done but for the good flow that it gives and the sadness that ...

This poem is sort of confusing to me I had a hard time figuring out what was happening. The format makes it a little easier though but I especially was ...

Hello Doctor!! Like your poem and the way you describe yourself (the butterfly). Also I get the feeling that you're held back or caged by something by the way you ...

Wow!! This is amazing love all the descriptive words. Also the fear of darkness is one thing that I can relate to so reading this was like thinking my own ...