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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Unbroken

    Hello, Ivywater. That's a very inspiring poem you have here. I kind of like it but I do have to say that, it would be so much better if you ...

    Mar 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Treasure Every Moment

    Oh my goodness! This was so sad, sweet, and amazing! I really, really loved it. I think this is one of the best short stories I've read. But before I ...

    Mar 17, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ry

    Hello it's Keepwriting here for a review just trying to clear out the green room. This was so sad! Poor puppy... *sniffle sniffle* I did enjoy reading this so I'm ...

    Mar 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Ice Vs Fire

    Wow, this was really cool! And the picture that you put with it was really nice as well! The only complaint I have with this poem is that the third ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (1)

    Hey, Skins. I'm finally here to review your work, as requested. Sorry it took awhile. I had tests and such to deal with. Anyway, let's get into the review shall ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Mary-Jane Elizabeth III

    Hey, speakerskat. Sorry it took so long. My life's been packed. Anyway, I'm going to get into the review... Beginning: Okay, this didn't even seem real to me. The mother ...

    Mar 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: When I was strongest

    First I have to say, "Wow." This was so sad CuriosityCat. But it brought me back down to earth again. I never really heard in detail what people who experience ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2

    Hey, BlueJayWalker10. I'm here to review your work, as requested. Sorry it took so long btw. Anyways, I really, really loved this chapter better than the last one. This felt ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Mirrors. .srorriM

    Wow! This was great Snazzy I loved the way this poem flowed. The title was also eye-catching. I almost want to go back and read all your poems. Here take ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Have You Heard

    Hello, Keepwriting here to rip this poem apart. (: Have you heard of the well run dry? The bird sang soft, and the night was nigh, but no one heard ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1 [Original Draft, Absolute Garbage]

    Good morning, BlueJayWalker10. It's Keepwriting up nice and early to review your work (as requested). Sorry it took so long btw! My life got in the way of things. To ...

    Mar 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Return to Oblivion Draft

    Hey, dracowave. Keepwriting here to review your work as requested. I really enjoyed this. At the beginning I was kind of dreading reading about gods and stuff just cause it's ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To Turn a Spark Into a Forest Fire

    Hello, bluewaterlily. I'm here because you have asked me to review your poem. I must say that I really enjoyed it. The flow was very nice and the imagery was ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Rescued Love

    Hello, speakerskat. Review day's almost here (which is probably why you didn't get a review right away). I enjoyed reading this and I thought it had some truth in it. ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I Told Her I Loved Her on the Fourth of July

    Hey, EmmVeePi. Just decided to drop by and leave you with a review (since no one else has... I'm the first yay!) Anyway, I liked reading this poem. It wasn't ...

    Feb 23, 2016


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