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Re: Unbroken
Hello, Ivywater. That's a very inspiring poem you have here. I kind of like it but I do have to say that, it would be so much better if you ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: Treasure Every Moment
Oh my goodness! This was so sad, sweet, and amazing! I really, really loved it. I think this is one of the best short stories I've read. But before I ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: Ry
Hello it's Keepwriting here for a review just trying to clear out the green room. This was so sad! Poor puppy... *sniffle sniffle* I did enjoy reading this so I'm ...
Mar 16, 2016 -
Re: Ice Vs Fire
Wow, this was really cool! And the picture that you put with it was really nice as well! The only complaint I have with this poem is that the third ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (1)
Hey, Skins. I'm finally here to review your work, as requested. Sorry it took awhile. I had tests and such to deal with. Anyway, let's get into the review shall ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: Mary-Jane Elizabeth III
Hey, speakerskat. Sorry it took so long. My life's been packed. Anyway, I'm going to get into the review... Beginning: Okay, this didn't even seem real to me. The mother ...
Mar 13, 2016 -
Re: When I was strongest
First I have to say, "Wow." This was so sad CuriosityCat. But it brought me back down to earth again. I never really heard in detail what people who experience ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2
Hey, BlueJayWalker10. I'm here to review your work, as requested. Sorry it took so long btw. Anyways, I really, really loved this chapter better than the last one. This felt ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Mirrors. .srorriM
Wow! This was great Snazzy I loved the way this poem flowed. The title was also eye-catching. I almost want to go back and read all your poems. Here take ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: Have You Heard
Hello, Keepwriting here to rip this poem apart. (: Have you heard of the well run dry? The bird sang soft, and the night was nigh, but no one heard ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1 [Original Draft, Absolute Garbage]
Good morning, BlueJayWalker10. It's Keepwriting up nice and early to review your work (as requested). Sorry it took so long btw! My life got in the way of things. To ...
Mar 4, 2016 -
Re: Return to Oblivion Draft
Hey, dracowave. Keepwriting here to review your work as requested. I really enjoyed this. At the beginning I was kind of dreading reading about gods and stuff just cause it's ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: To Turn a Spark Into a Forest Fire
Hello, bluewaterlily. I'm here because you have asked me to review your poem. I must say that I really enjoyed it. The flow was very nice and the imagery was ...
Feb 24, 2016 -
Re: Rescued Love
Hello, speakerskat. Review day's almost here (which is probably why you didn't get a review right away). I enjoyed reading this and I thought it had some truth in it. ...
Feb 24, 2016 -
Re: I Told Her I Loved Her on the Fourth of July
Hey, EmmVeePi. Just decided to drop by and leave you with a review (since no one else has... I'm the first yay!) Anyway, I liked reading this poem. It wasn't ...
Feb 23, 2016
