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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: If I could Remember

    Howdy. Poetry isn't my forte, but I made a general offer and you took me up on it so here I am! Hope this is helpful. "There was once a ...

    Apr 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1: Silence and snow

    Howdy, I'm Rubric and I'll be reviewing your work. I'll begin with the general and move to the technical. Generally I enjoyed the piece. In terms of the first chapter, ...

    Apr 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: The Revenge

    I started doing a point by point review, but that seemed pretty fruitless. There are some clear reurring errors here, and I'll try to point them out so that you ...

    Mar 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Seven Ravens (intro)

    Hello I'm Rubric, and I'll be throwing my opinions at you today! I very much enjoyed your characterisation of Vazel, your innovation of the drug and reflection on its consequences, ...

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sacrifice - Prologue

    Dear Pahoem, I'm Rubric and I'll begin with the general before moving to the specific. I enjoy the piece. It begins in the middle of things, in this case the ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Border of Light - Prologue (Old)

    Howdy. I'm Rubric and I'll be inflicting my opinion upon your art this evening. To begin with the general before moving to the particular, I must say that I found ...

    Dec 8, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Cadence~ Part One of One: Out of Darkness

    Howdy Threnody, I see there's been at least one fairly comprehensive review, so I'll stick to points that I feel need an expansive response. Overall I think it's great and ...

    Nov 22, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The first song: Dreams of A Broken World

    Howdy, I'm Rubric, and given the relative brevity of your piece I'll jump right to it. "It is a beautiful city; one grown so vast that it has swallowed whole ...

    Oct 18, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction Re: Love Like Clockwork 2

    EDIT: Sorry for the double post. This is what happens when I'm online at 2am. I apologise for taking so long to get to this. University commitments and such. I ...

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The end of Nicole Pedeare- Prolouge

    "My name is Nicole Pedeare, and that’s all I can tell you at this point." This is a great opening line, but it's a little confusing in that it clearly ...

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Merlasia

    Sorry for the wait. I'll jump right on in to the specific and head toward the general. "I come from a world that is hidden by a cluster of stars ...

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Horror Re: Love Like Clockwork 1

    As is my habit, I'll begin with the specific, and meander toward the general. As replies tend to artificially inflate the review count of a piece, It'd be best to ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Zegentia: The Roads of Marceris Ch.3 (Part 1)

    As is my wont, I’ve begun with the particular, and moved to the general. "sighing and closing his eyes as he shook nervously" there's a tense issue here, though you ...

    Jul 18, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: Darkness

    Howdy, I'm Rubric. I'll start with a nit-pick and move to more general feedback. I may only post one or two examples of errors if they reflect systemic misunderstandings of ...

    Jul 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The War of Night and Day 1-3

    Howdy, First off, it would probably be good to get your review count up: you'll find people will be more willing to give you detailed reviews if you're also contributing ...

    Jul 5, 2012


I am always saying "Glad to've met you" to somebody I'm not at all glad I met. If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though.
— Holden Caulfield