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hahaha i love this! its sort of pointless and random but that's what i like about it! I just have one little bitty suggestion. Put more detail into what's going ...

ok first of all, Jesus Christ DreamWalker!!!!! WOW!! Ok, on to the review! The only two problems I had with the story is when you described Nick is that you ...

wow! That was....uh.....well, that was disturbing! In a good way of course! :) but ya, wow very interesting how it was in second person. It seemed like it was a ...

I really liked it!! The only thing is when the story was from Natalia's point of view you could give some more detail. All the other characters i got the ...

ow my head.... The first sentence was so filled with big words that it was hard to grasp what you were trying to convey. And no offense but TOTAL abuse ...

See trinity!!! I told you this was a good poem!! That just goes to show that you should trust me when i recomend BOOKS (i told you so!!!) as well ...

A nice winter swim.The snow has just fallen, So fluffy, so nice. I go take a walk, I fall through the ice. Its cold and untelling, Not reavelling at all. ...

haha!!! love it!!! its sooooo funny!! i can totally relate to Tory! I love love love her dry humor!! The only thing is that i would like to know what ...

hola chikita!! well...this ones tricky. I had to re-read it twice. Not because it was confusing but because i liked it. A Lot in fact but it had some rig ...

its good!! one question though.............. why is it in fantasy fiction? unless the story becomes more fantasy later on....then just never mind :D

I liked it. And sorry if you like it but I hardly ever nit-pick about grammar and commas because i can barley place them correctly myself. Anyways! I liked the ...

I agree with Ofir, i lurve this!! I didn't really find anything that was that messed up. I agree with Ofir (again) when uh she? said that you really shouldn't ...

sigh i love YWS. Seriously their are so many talented writers who if their book was at Boarders or Barnes and Noble i would pick it up and be like, ...

Hola Chola! Nice chapter! I agree with everyone how you need to put more detail into the places you skimmed, ect. ect. you've already heard it. My review is this: ...

well you said you wanted this ripped to shreds soo if you didn't mean it then stop reading here... ok well after the introduction and when ben comes into the ...