Royboy

Hey, I'm just going to jump right to it. =] You've got a great imagination, by the way. “Yeah! A story!” Said another. Said should be lowercase. Soon, all the ...

"I stared at myself in the mirror, watching my thighs, my stomach, my arms, my everything jiggle." Haha, I love the way that begins. This just made me feel better ...

"I felt a hand come on my shoulder, it was warm and sweaty, I could hear who ever it was praying for me, I was immediatly uncomfortable." -Try to avoid ...

Wow, this was really good. I like that line towards the end, "I am devoured." It's a good descriptive word, but it also shows the little kid eating his or ...

The wars that once ravaged the underworld are now a thing of the past although there are still some small skirmishes every now and then but there has not been ...

GAH! It's pure fate that I should stumble across this book review. I'm going to thank you a whole lot for the next... month or so. I read one book ...

*Gasp!* I'm going to find JC house and kill Richard. It's all his fault! I like Amber bringing Jamie to reality and telling her how it is and what will ...

I'm afraid to wear beads now... There was nothing to hand on to for balance. I think you mean hang. I looked about frantically, but I couldn’t see at thing. ...

I loved this. My only little titch was that maybe Mary could just walk out without saying I hate you. It seems more dramatic to me and that's what you're ...

*scream* ... okay that was in a good way kind of scream. Hehe. I don't like surprises!!!! I think you did really good this time. I'm a little upset at ...

It’s white and beige paint was beginning to chip , and the giant red cross was chipping . There were white blinds in all of the windows, most were closed, ...

“No , Jamie,” her mom pulled her hand back. Add in that comma for direct adress. Basically, I couldn't really find anything that ShadowTwit hadn't already gotten. I read that ...

I'm confused. It's just a conversation between a girl and some bubble fairies, which isn't bad, but it neds some description. Also, I don't have a name for the main ...

She grinned at him, secretly wanting to kill him for booking them a caravan holiday in the first place Period. “You smell of…paprika,” He inhaled her hair deeply “And lavender… ...

Fun fun! I want to read more. I want to read sooo much more! hehe. His uncle is pretty moody, I must admit. Was it meant that way, or did ...