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RoyalHighness

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Scenery

    Your amazing love poem on the spotlight was brilliant, first of all, so to hear this from you is really special! Thank you so much; you've no idea what an ...

    Mar 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Rubbernecking

    I love this poem! What a punch at the end, and such clear, concise and cutting imagery with simple diction, no bells or whistles, just simple elegance. Lovely, can't wait ...

    Mar 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Rubbernecking

    I love this poem! What a punch at the end, and such clear, concise and cutting imagery with simple diction, no bells or whistles, just simple elegance. Lovely, can't wait ...

    Mar 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Tables

    Thank you so much! Yeah, I kept trying to make this longer but I kept hitting a snag and decided to try testing the limits. I'm glad my poem inspired ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Tables

    You're right, it's too short, but before this, I was writing pages and pages and getting nowhere, so I figured I'd try out the opposite extreme and work my way ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Twilight Smell

    Thank you so much for your review! So thoughtful, thank you!

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Twilight Smell

    Wow, thank you so much for your lovely review! (For the record, there's no such thing as a non-poet and yes, those lines are out of place! I'll consider revising, ...

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Twilight Smell

    Thank you for your review! Yeah, I couldn't think of a better way to incorporate those two last lines, but I'm sure I'll come up with some kind of metaphysical ...

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Twilight Smell

    Thank you for your review! But you misread the line; it's whose cries with the wind oft fight As in the cries of the trees fight with the wind... It ...

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Je Suis Charlie

    I see what you mean; I don't condone their drawings and insults, but I support their rights to express themselves without fear of losing their lives. Thank you for your ...

    Jan 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Je Suis Charlie

    No, you know what, it doesn't seem right, but I've thought about this a lot and here's what I've come up with. The tragedy of murder is the same whether ...

    Jan 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Je Suis Charlie

    Thank you for your kind review! I have seen Merlin, such a great show XD I actually made a mistake in the A/N. Ten journalists were killed in a terrorist ...

    Jan 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To My Future Niece

    Of course not! No worries, your review was flawless, just like yourself.

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To My Future Niece

    Thank you!! Yeah, I think you're right about the line breaks. I originally wrote this in one long stanza and broke it up later and I never could find the ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To My Future Niece

    Thank you!! No, YOU stay awesome! :D

    Dec 1, 2014


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