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The capitalizing thing is something all the characters do; it's a little mannerism I've picked up from John Green's TFIOS. It's supposed to be the title of something--something that only ...

Thank you so much! I'll get right on that because I personally thought this chapter could use more action too. I just didn't know exactly what it needed. Thank you ...

Thank you, Hannah! So far, I need more details about the scene and now the car. I might need some help crafting another stanza from your suggestions, because I am ...

Oh, why thank you! Every thing I have is for you to stalk, my friend. Could you help me write a stanza like the one you described about adding some ...

Those are both great interpretations! Actually, the speaker is myself. I love both of your ideas, mostly because they're a lot more complex than what I had in mind. I ...

HOLY POO KEEP WRITING

Haha I should've known :) I'm notoriously bad at reviewing poetry. Please forgive my ignorance :D it's an awesome poem!

I did pretty much all the fixes you suggested except the capitalizing thing. If you remember in Frey's last chapter, he calls Juno a Demon Witch from Hell%u2014all capitalized! It's ...

This was lovely! Hang on, let me re-read it and I'll write a review.

I'm sorry my dear! I was very tired today and in a very poor mood due to recent events and I'm afraid I didn't have the strength to review your ...

GOOD :D if facial expressions were stuffed animals, smiles would be teddy bears.

I'm here if you ever need someone to talk to

*claps* *uproarious applause* *standing ovation*

*rubs hands greedily* mwahahaha excellent

Fantastic!