RoyalHighness

RoyalHighness here to review! Whoa. Whoa. WHOA. I've never seen Doctor Who, but I've been on tumblr enough to get the general concept. This is really cool! I love the ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I really like this story! It's realistic, it's totally how a teenager sounds, and it's really well-written! Great job! I'm really interested in finding out ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! This will be difficult to review, because I've been where you are, and this is /you/ getting something off your chest. So I'll be gentle. ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, so this was okay. There are two lines I have problems with. "And me they would see." I see what you're trying to do ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! This is...interesting. I don't really get the repetition of "stimulation," but, for some weird reason, I like it--kind of like when people are eating something ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, so this was a little on the over-dramatic side, but that's necessary when you're writing about lost love. The problem I have with your ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Iggy, this is great! Let's talk about what you need to fix before I tell you why I liked it so much. The first paragraph ...

*stops writing to review this masterpiece* This. This is beauty. Just. Give me a second. RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, calm. Well. This sent me into an emotional rollercoaster ...

Holy. Cow. RoyalHighness has arrived to review. Holy. Cow. Deanie, you have a /gift/. There is exactly one technical mistake, and that is the line that ends with "parents." "Parents," ...

This is so powerful. RoyalHighness here to review. Overall, your technicals are fine, but I wasn't really paying attention because your poem had me in raptures. I can't even...I don't ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! WOW I LOVE THIS okay calm. Lovely poem you've got here! Really nice descriptions, figurative language, imagery, the whole nine! All that's needed from this ...

Ah, poetry, my forte. RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I love when poets break up their sentences with indentations! It makes me think they're trying to tell me something sneaky, ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! This is great stuff! Good job, Willow (can I call you Willow? I love that). I'm writing something about blindness myself, and I actually asked ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So this is your first work? Wow! I wish my first things had been this good. There are a few things you need to fix, ...

YES I LOVE THIS Okay calm. RoyalHighness has arrived to review. Your tech stuff is flawless. I love the usage of the indentation to place some more emphasis on each ...