RoyalHighness

*should be studying, decides to review another fantastic poem* RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So, first off, "pressence," is spelled "presence." Just a minor typo, no worries! :D I love ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So this is a bit of a fixer-upper...Just a few nitpicks, no worries! :D First of all, you need some apostrophes in each "im," or ...

*gobbles down the next poem like it's Thanksgiving turkey* Ahhh delicious. RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So this is nice. I like the speaker's voice that you've written, because I ...

*attacks the next poem* RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Ah, another one. *licks lips* I'll get weirder as I continue reviewing your stuff, just a forewarning. Again with the spacing! ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Ah, you again! Your second-ever poem? It's lovely! I always love when poets do the funky spacing, because I always drive myself crazy trying to ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Since it's so short, it'll be difficult to review this...but I'll do my best! First off, I like the enjambment. It makes the poem flow ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you get a chance to post more stuff outside of school, because this is pretty good! The ...

Wow. RoyalHighness has arrived to review, and that was a good "wow." In fact, that was a /great/ "wow." Before I get to gushing about how much I LOVED THIS, ...

I TOTALLY READ THIS IN MY OWN VOICE AND IT WAS SO PERFECT Okay, calm. RoyalHighness has arrived to review! This is a really adorable poem, and I think just ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I really, really like this! I like the numbering, and the descriptions of all the people. I could just /see/ that man with the open ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Hi there! Great little short you've got here. There are a few nitpicks I have for you, and then a bit of praise, and then ...

*shivers* RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So overall, I liked this, even though I didn't quite get the full meaning of it in the first read. I had to read ...

*flips desk* Whoa, this was legit. Okay, RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Overall, this really made me /think./ It was like this poem took me by the hand, led me ...

Okay, calm. RoyalHighness has arrived to review. This, in short, broke my heart. Just. This poem took my heart, and raised it up over its head, and then smashed it ...

I love this so much! It's so dramatic and the ending is so funny. This won't be a particularly /helpful/ review, but that's because there's nothing to fix, to be ...