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Re: The Fallen God Chapter 1 (pretty rough draft)
It's pretty cool! Maybe needs something added/ edited here or there but it's a rough draft and hey that's what they're like. maybe a bit repetitive with " from miles ...
Jan 4, 2019 -
Re: Attention Seeker
This is really cool! So. Relatable. 😂 Have a good day
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: You Are Not a Failure
This is awesome!
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: need a name, please help 1.1
is he going to do BoB tho?
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: I Tried
yeah but at the time i was like maybe maybe maybe there will be enough snow for school to be delayed maybe and then NO FROG DISSECTION And the snow ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: need a name, please help 1.1
:D dont be stressed just read and its not like it actually matters anyways... but if your bro competes? we have to crush him. and we will.
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: Song: My Fandom Beliefs
Hey this is pretty cool! Somehow stumbled upon it and it's awesome. I don't really know that much about songwriting (besides what I learned from my time in like 4th ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: need a name, please help 1.1
This is on my phone so it'll be short but I love it... I think I talked to you about it before but I think it's awesome and I'll review ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: I Tried
Hey! It's cool, I love the ending and the "nothing to distract me from the way I think" It's awesome. That's really relatable and amazin I don't really know how ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: Drifting
Hey! It's pretty cool. I don't really have anything to improve... yeah. Except actually maybe use a better word rather than "heavy wind" if that would maybe make it sound ...
Nov 19, 2018 -
Re: The Lies of The Fallen (Draft of Chapter 2)
Thank you so much for your review!
Nov 19, 2018 -
Re: The Lies of The Fallen (Draft of Chapter 2)
Oof I didn't realize that they said the same day... Thanks for that. The interruption thing was meant to be like so she didn't have to tell them anything... I ...
Nov 18, 2018 -
Re: Synesthesia Narrative Draft (will add more later)
:daddarth Idk if this will work but here goes
Nov 17, 2018 -
Re: Synesthesia Narrative Draft (will add more later)
Idk there are some pretty awesome ones.
Nov 17, 2018 -
Re: Synesthesia Narrative Draft (will add more later)
:D
Nov 17, 2018
