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Re: A Deserate Situation ch. 2
I really enjoyed this. The writing style is very fluid and I really appreciate that. Also, the dialogue is wonderful. It flows very well, and is not clunky at all. ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: The Before - 01
Well okay. Ummmmmmm.... First off, Wow. Quite honestly, this is really very interesting. It is extremely open. Open for thought, and quite a lot of it. My first thought was, ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 37: The Revelation
hey, the Crow is here for a review! Okay, well, to start, I do indeed really like this. You are very good at depicting conversation. Many people are terrible at ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Other Half
A policeman came to our house a few weeks later telling us that they had found her body in a corn field a few streets away. He was a man ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Okay
I think this is cool. So many people are always complaining about life, and how bad they have it. But so often, they are doing nothing to alleviate their pain ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Untitled- Chapter 1
Love Has No Borders-Title idea? Pretty good. I felt like my head was gonna explode with all the information. might want to consider the possibility of stretching that out more, ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Me.Prolouge.
Holy Crap. Dude, This is seriously good. The imagery that this gave to me almost gave me chills. It is a wonderful blend of Sorrow, eventual confidence, and a hint ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: The Rise of the Fallen: Prologue
This is fantastic. I have always wanted a book just like this. A mix between the series rangers apprentice, and something like Inkheart. These really are some cool ideas, and ...
Nov 18, 2014
