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Rosy234

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Brother

    That was so good and emotional. You have really captured the emotion. Well done. Keep writing! :)

    Mar 2, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: No Point..

    Thank you so much!

    Feb 2, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: No Point..

    Thank you so much!

    Feb 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: just breathe

    Hi, here with a review. I really liked your rhyme scheme, and the tittle really drew my attention. I liked how you've described the pain this person goes through. It's ...

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: No Point..

    I went back and changed the things you pointed out.. Thanks again and I really hoped you enjoyed it. I also really like the line "we walked in the rain; ...

    Jan 12, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: No Point..

    Thanks for the review, I'll go back and change it. It was a new area for me that's probably why I have a lot of mistakes.

    Jan 12, 2017
  • Other » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: The White Rose

    You're welcome and it's no problem.

    Jan 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: From a Dream

    welcome

    Dec 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Creek

    WOW

    Dec 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: From a Dream

    Hi, here with a review. Firstly, I really liked your choice of vocabulary and I found the plot of your story interesting. I also like how the character has mixed ...

    Nov 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Journey That Never Ends...

    Thanks!

    Nov 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Journey That Never Ends...

    Thank you!

    Nov 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Journey That Never Ends...

    Thank you! I'll keep this is mind

    Nov 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Journey That Never Ends...

    Thank you so much for your review and i'll keep it in mind the next time Ii write a poem.. To be honest, this is my first time writing a ...

    Nov 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: How to Girl

    Hi, I am here with a review. I just wanted to say that I loved your poem. The first thing I want to say is that I found your title ...

    Oct 20, 2016


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