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Re: Virus 76
I don't want nothing but compliments. Im just saying, I get next to none.
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: Virus 76
Thanks for the review, i'll go through it Firstly, did not know it would turn out like that Secondly, yes, it was a normal day, virus outbreaks happen all the ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Virus 76
Thank you for the review, im going to go through everything. Firstly, yes, it's rushed, but I wasn't sure what to do. Secondly, he knows this because he's seen them. ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Virus 76
Thank you for the review, im going to go through them all Firstly, i'm not going to take it out completely. Secondly, I could use that rewording. Thirdly, I meant ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Fear
Glad you loved it! I'm glad you interpreted the bridge as that way, it gives me a new perspective
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Fear
But just criticism. No good points.
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Fear
Well Lily, I think you gave no good points. You cant just have bad points. And i'm very offended that you think I should google this. So thanks a lot
Mar 6, 2017 -
Re: Firebreed chapter 2-- Cassy the Killer Queen
Oh, that's what you were going for? You most likely got it
Mar 6, 2017 -
Re: Rene Chuopa-Zenying
Hi Storm, thanks for the review Firstly, I am seriously offended you would say its boring to the reader. It is not boring, its necessary. Secondly, I thought people wanted ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Rene Chuopa-Zenying
Ok Alliicide, thanks for reviewing! Firstly, i'm not going to cut off any unnecessary details as they may be necessary to me. Sorry Secondly, It probably deserved to be longer ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: The Raven: A Five Hundred Word Story
Hey Feltrix! I'm gonna go through your review! Firstly, he doesn't have any nicknames. Fine, you prefer descriptions. But I just decided to put it. Secondly, fine yes ravens probably ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: The Raven: A Five Hundred Word Story
Ok, thanks for the point of view bit. And yeah, maybe conflict would of boosted the story a bit, but I never thought to add it. Its your opinion, that's ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: The Raven: A Five Hundred Word Story
Hey Penta! Thank you for the review! I'm going to go through everything you said Firstly, this story was not meant to have tension, or conflict, or anything. I find ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: The Sorrowful Hopes of a Sinful Man
WOW. THIS WAS AMAZING. I just could not stop reading this masterpiece. It rhymed, it had amazing punctuation, with great uses of words such as 'naught' and 'preach' This poem ...
Feb 24, 2017 -
Re: Strange Cycle of Possibilities and Disappointments
Is this story true? A good entry nonetheless
Feb 24, 2017
