Rosewood

Thanks again! I write this from Jose%u2019s perspective for two reason- one being that I needed to show what Alice was capable of rather than merely insinuating it and, two ...

Wow, this was incredibly helpful- thank you so much!

Thank you yet again! I love the feedback and helpful points you've given me, all very valid. :) I do want to add something in case you end up choosing ...

Thanks for the review! For the vision thing, I%u2019m trying to hint at concussion and blood loss. And as for the perspective change, sorry, I meant to put %u201CAlice%u201D at ...

Wow- thanks for your review! I'm so glad you pointed out the dialogue issue because I've begun to realize how two of the characters I'm shifting perspectives with seem to ...

Thank you for your feedback!! I see your point with these, and I will go back and correct them. I would like to say that since this book is split ...

Wow- thank you so much! First of all, you%u2019re too kind, and while I actually didn%u2019t intend the rain part to be a metaphor, I really like your interpretation. And ...

Thank you so much for your feedback!

Thank you so much for the feedback! And I totally see what your saying with the word choice, and I'll look into better substitutes.

Thanks!

Aw, thank you so much!

Oh wow, thanks spunkyspacekitty! Your review was very helpful and I'll fix my mistake as soon as I can. As for your first question, Rory was referring to Alice's supposed ...

Thanks for your helpful feedback! As for its length, I intended that. In the previous chapters, Alice fell off a cliff - presumed to be dead. This was just to ...

Oh my gosh, thanks!! You're so sweet and I'm going to fix that mistake ASAP.

Thanks Momo! I definitely see my errors in grammar, and to clarify for the last issue, she can't tell how long the length of the fall is. My bad, I'll ...