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  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Surprise

    Well this certainly reminds me of my brother and I, save for a few small details. I agree with Vil that this was a little too short, but you could ...

    Sep 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Snake Bite

    Okay... I'm finally here... I agree with Elinor, the setting of 1915 feels somewhat wrong. I know you're considering changing it to be more modern, and I hope you choose ...

    Sep 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Other Re: When The Rose Dies (Prologue)

    This was interesting... I want to know more! As a prologue, this was good, it drew the reader, (me), in. I like the title and can't wait to hear what ...

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Historical Fiction Re: The Cadaver and the Column

    I always love a short story... the more horror the better! That being said, on to the review. Before I can tell you something interesting, I must tell you something ...

    Sep 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (WIP Title)- Prologue pt.2

    Hey y'all, I'm here to give you another review! “No! That box is more important than me. Go!” the woman said, pointing at an alley behind the man. “You have ...

    Sep 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Moth

    I don't know what to say other than this was absolutely beautiful. The detail was incredible, the paragraphs were well written, and the overall flow was lovely. I can't seem ...

    Sep 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: (WIP Title)- Prologue pt.1

    Nice beginning! I really like fantasy, and this held me fast with the believable dialogue, interesting plot, (so far), and the well-written details. ‘You won’t find anything in this mess,’ ...

    Sep 16, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Her World Below

    Nice story! The pond in the back yard reached to the ocean that was not, but a few feet away. I wasn't sure about this, it just sounded a little ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lullaby

    This will be a short review because I'm in a rush, but I'll try to be as helpful as I can! Is this from or based on a specific thing? ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Writer

    I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'll just share my take on this and my suggestions! Ding! You've finally grasped it. As you race to your desk to ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: Sappho and the End of the World

    Aww! This was just so bittersweet and heartwarming, really and truly a good tale. I'm going to praise you constantly in this review, and there's nothing you can do about ...

    Sep 10, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Childhood magic

    Hey there! So, I don't know much about poetry, and I'm constantly learning more on this very website! Instead, I'm going to review the story behind your words, which I ...

    Sep 10, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Other Re: A Future Mistake - Chapter Two

    Ah, I see... As promised, here I am to write a review on your fabulous work! My first impression was this was a piece of historical fiction, but I see ...

    Sep 10, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Other Re: A Future Mistake - Chapter One

    Why hello there! I just like to start off by saying, this was very enjoyable to read! I usually dislike reading any historical fiction aside from WW2 accounts, but this ...

    Sep 9, 2020
  • Other » General, General Re: [deleted]

    Nice, this was a good spooky story! I loved the direction it took and the strange layout. I only have a couple cases of nit-picking and a few suggestions . ...

    Aug 12, 2020


He who has a why to live for can bear with almost any how.
— Friedrich Nietzsche