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Re: The Surprise
Well this certainly reminds me of my brother and I, save for a few small details. I agree with Vil that this was a little too short, but you could ...
Sep 25, 2020 -
Re: Snake Bite
Okay... I'm finally here... I agree with Elinor, the setting of 1915 feels somewhat wrong. I know you're considering changing it to be more modern, and I hope you choose ...
Sep 25, 2020 -
Re: When The Rose Dies (Prologue)
This was interesting... I want to know more! As a prologue, this was good, it drew the reader, (me), in. I like the title and can't wait to hear what ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: The Cadaver and the Column
I always love a short story... the more horror the better! That being said, on to the review. Before I can tell you something interesting, I must tell you something ...
Sep 23, 2020 -
Re: (WIP Title)- Prologue pt.2
Hey y'all, I'm here to give you another review! “No! That box is more important than me. Go!” the woman said, pointing at an alley behind the man. “You have ...
Sep 18, 2020 -
Re: The Moth
I don't know what to say other than this was absolutely beautiful. The detail was incredible, the paragraphs were well written, and the overall flow was lovely. I can't seem ...
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: (WIP Title)- Prologue pt.1
Nice beginning! I really like fantasy, and this held me fast with the believable dialogue, interesting plot, (so far), and the well-written details. ‘You won’t find anything in this mess,’ ...
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: Her World Below
Nice story! The pond in the back yard reached to the ocean that was not, but a few feet away. I wasn't sure about this, it just sounded a little ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Lullaby
This will be a short review because I'm in a rush, but I'll try to be as helpful as I can! Is this from or based on a specific thing? ...
Sep 13, 2020 -
Re: The Writer
I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'll just share my take on this and my suggestions! Ding! You've finally grasped it. As you race to your desk to ...
Sep 13, 2020 -
Re: Sappho and the End of the World
Aww! This was just so bittersweet and heartwarming, really and truly a good tale. I'm going to praise you constantly in this review, and there's nothing you can do about ...
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: Childhood magic
Hey there! So, I don't know much about poetry, and I'm constantly learning more on this very website! Instead, I'm going to review the story behind your words, which I ...
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: A Future Mistake - Chapter Two
Ah, I see... As promised, here I am to write a review on your fabulous work! My first impression was this was a piece of historical fiction, but I see ...
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: A Future Mistake - Chapter One
Why hello there! I just like to start off by saying, this was very enjoyable to read! I usually dislike reading any historical fiction aside from WW2 accounts, but this ...
Sep 9, 2020 -
Re: [deleted]
Nice, this was a good spooky story! I loved the direction it took and the strange layout. I only have a couple cases of nit-picking and a few suggestions . ...
Aug 12, 2020
