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Thank you Alliyah! This is really helpful and made me think of some things I could do to revise this before my workshop :)

Hey thanks for the reviews! As a general heads up to you, I wrote this novel for the last man standing contest which demands 1000 words every week without missing ...

Tenement gothic aesthetic, very moody and atmospheric. (lovely poem)

Thank you for the review! To answer your bee question:

ooh that's a lovely message! Unfortunately even with your explanation I struggle to see it in the poem. Usually in my poetry reviews I advise less narrative and more images, ...

I mean... they totally commanded the literary spotlight for a hot minute back in 2014 lol wow I can't believe that was 6 years ago what???

Probably just the way it turned out, plus I think it was more important to me to have complete clarity in this poem than in others of mine where I ...

lines like that use what's called "enjambment" and it's one of my favorite poetical tools! It leads the reader to maintain momentem between lines to keep a more conversational and ...

Wow lots of interpretations that I was not intending but which are very intriguing nonetheless! Unfortunately I can't chase a more political interpretation with this poem because of the assignment, ...

I got mistaken for a dude twice in the last two days haha. But I've had this haircut 3 years now and it hardly ever happens anymore. But at first ...

RE: tomahto see: suggest distinction without a difference. she's implying a fool, hunter, and king are all the same.

see: suggest distinction without a difference. she's implying a fool, hunter, and king are all the same.

I like this! It's good to see you back on the poetry scene!

Thanks for these super helpful reviews!

Thanks for the review!