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Thanks for the review. It was really helpful and fun to read. :]

could you point out the placeswhere commas are missing? I've read over this several times and can't seem to find any. And yes, the hyphens were there totally on purpose. ...

Those letters are standard short-hand for stage directions in script writing. I wrote this work on celtx, an online script writing website, so a lot of the really important script ...

My thesis is the final sentence of the first paragraph. Thanks for the review!

I really enjoyed this.

I changed "silence" to "absence" because I totally agree with you on that part. I changed around the wording a bit on the spine line while keeping it essentially the ...

Thanks for the review mags

Your teacher is incorrect! Sorry! Many famous poets such as E.E. Cummings wouldn't use punctuation or capitalization. Many of his most famous poems don't. I'm in school still too and ...

Poetry does not have to follow the conventions of English such as grammar, complete sentences, etc. Many famous poems have no punctuation or capitalization. That's kind of the modern style ...

Wow. How did this pop up again? I kind of completely forgot this existed hehe It almost feels like /I'm/ in the literary spotlight :')

Thanks for the review

Everything you pointed out was 100% intentional. The poem is supposed to be very train-of-thought, so for that reason, I made it pretty much two long sentences with an introduction ...

Repetition when used sensibly and appropriately (basically, as long as you have a reason for the repetition) can be really fantastic. Most of my favorite famous poems have a lot ...

Actually, contrary to popular belief, you 100% do NOT have to capitalize the beginning letter after a line-break. That's a common misconception, perpetuated by school teachers everywhere. All capitali

This isn't a review; I just felt like commenting. c: I remember reading a bunch of these for the literary magazine, and I remember liking the whole going back in ...