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Hello! I'm going to take this numeral by numeral. ^_^ i: Okay, so I didn't know what berber carpet is, so I looked it up. The room I'm in now ...

Hello MoonlitSlumber! (I love your username! It's so poetic!) I actually really liked this poem. I enjoyed the descriptions of what he did, and this person's reasonings as to why. ...

Hello! Ooh twist ending. I love the repetition of the leaves. It really was the thread throughout the entire piece. Now, I see the voice you have here is very ...

Hello. First of all, this sounds like you were just translating frozen's "Let it go" XD (can't hold me back any more! ♫) Regardless. One thing that threw me for ...

Hello! Hm. This is a very strong statement. I like how blunt and clear you are. A few things: The kids are attacking without a care, Does this mean that ...

Hello! Ooh haikus. Haikus are tricky. There's all these rules you're supposed to follow and such. This is the most helpful article I have read while learning about haikus. It ...

Hello! As the reader of this, I am rather confused at what you're trying to tell me. I have no idea what the message of this is, or what it ...

Hello! This was a pretty poem. I like the message of the moon representing more. You had some nice images in here, I especially like the "Not just a rock ...

Hello! I could imagine this working as some kind of lyrics. I think you could definitely fit it to music. But as this is not labeled "lyrics," I'm going to ...

:O Seee? You can write poetry! This was absopositively wonderful! It had such a strong rhythm, and I wouldn't be surprised if it could be easily set to music. First ...

Hello! I've come to save you from the green room's clutches. I love the message of this! It's the perfect rally cry for a better world. I could actually really ...

Hello! I'm here at last for your review! I thought this was interesting. I like the message and the tone of it. I just felt, even though you were using ...

I think this was written really well. The rhymes were good (first time I've ever said that for something that's not firmly structured), and you used good poetic devices. There ...

Hello! Finally getting around to reviewing this! I thought this was a very sweet poem. I liked the story, and the part about the rose. I liked the simplicity of ...

Hello! I'm here with your long-awaited review. Okay, I'll be honest and blunt: don't take offense. I didn't really like this so much. I suppose you were intending it to ...