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Hello! I here for that poetry exchange thingy! yay! I think this was a pretty unique poem. It reminded me of sending applications for college or something (although I've never ...

This was unique, and I love the stuff you did with the newspaper lettering. I found it hard to understand though. In the comment below, you made it seem like ...

Hello! This was very simple. I enjoyed it's simplicity and meaning. I don't really think you need any rhyme here. I'm happy you didn't have it, actually because most likely ...

Hello Mags! This was so beautiful, so tender and soft. This was very well-written, so I don't have much to say in a review of it. All of these are ...

Hello! So I was going to review this, but then I didn't, but then I ended up with it for the review exchange, so here I am. This was a ...

And I just think that the and at the beginning sounds like you're bringing up an old argument. Hey Aley! So I very much appreciated the sentiments in this that ...

Hello! This was a strangely peaceful poem. I very much enjoyed it. That said, it could be improved. I think much of this poem is cliche, but I understand the ...

Hello! This had a very... creepy and insane tone to it. It sent shivers down my spine. Every line was very descriptive. I like how you tied the holes from ...

Hello! First of all, I agree with everything Hannah said. Especially about the rhyme thing and the ending thing. You should definitely think over her suggestions. I think it would ...

Hello! Here to save this great poem from the Green Room! This left me with such a sweet yearning. I loved it. I loved the tone you created will all ...

Hello! I'm here to save this essay from the green room! This was written well as far as I could tell. I'm not sure what exactly your teacher asked for, ...

Hello! This was a beautifully descriptive poem, filled with emotion! Because I read your little thing about what this poem was about, I know what it is about. But if ...

Hello! This was a very emotional poem. I liked it quite a bit. I'm not quite so sure what happened though. What happened in the forest? Some sort of murderer? ...

This was really powerful. Like, very. I think stanzas would be very helpful in attracting people to this great piece of poetry. And the lines are kind of spacy. That's ...

Hello! This was a really angsty poem. XD I enjoyed it though. I think everyone feels this way at some point in their life, and it's nice to read it ...