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  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Immense bitterness (among other things (such as hatred (certain type of hatred)))

    Hello! I think we can all relate to the message behind this. People trying to "prove" themselves using the same worn out arguments. Very relatable to today and the issues ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Worry Lights

    I really liked this. Honestly, it's going to be hard to find things wrong with this. Let's start with things I liked to make it easier. I like the mood ...

    Jun 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sweltering.

    Hello! Who can't sympathize with this, amiright? It goes very nicely with your avvie too. I like how vivid and clear this is. I especially like the garland image. That ...

    Jun 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Tears

    Hello there Strange. You're first on my review rampage. Rawr! So a couple things that read awkwardly: under the soft drink waterfall I use to fill space. how does a ...

    Jun 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Roll over; die.

    hi strange I actually really liked this poem. It seems quite different from the things that you usually do. the images you have here are quite poignant. I don't know ...

    Jun 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: The toss of a crown

    Hello! I think this was an interesting concept, and I think I can almost grasp what you were trying to say in it, but I'm still a little lost in ...

    Jun 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Grandma, I Fear.

    Hello! I really, really like the sentiment of this poem, and for what it is-- a poem for your grandmother-- it is perfect. However, if it is a poem for ...

    Jun 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Recovery; noun

    This was beautiful, spark. As I'm on a review hike, I'm going to do my best to try to review this. It's interesting, all the lines that you've posted on ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: I swear to Gosh I'll fight back.

    Hi! I'm here to save you from the dreaded Green Room. Knowing this probably has a Beach Boys reference in it, I'm just going to tell you that I don't ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Pop punk song in C#

    hi strange! I saw this still in the green room, so I thought I'd lift that for you. I really like this. Sometimes your satires leave me just confused if ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: C'est la vie

    Hello! This was an interesting concept. I like how it had a dark tone, but wasn't dark. The rhythm was pretty good, in my opinion, actually, and usually I don't ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Existence Beyond the Canyon

    Hiya! I really like this poem and I can relate to its sentiments. c: I too have an obsession with star poems and writing. The thing about both of those ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: What's for dinner, Eorzea?

    Okay, so I don't play Final Fantasy So a lot of this goes over my head. I like the kind of poetry that you write in all caps because your ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Sink

    Hello! So, interesting poem. Nice and short. However I am unsure what point it's trying to make. I get the whole dead inside contrasting with the dead outside. But is ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Lather III: The Sink Will Remember This

    Hello! I haven't read the other part of this, but this was a really cool poem. I love personification. Especially to inanimate objects. I think I like that more than ...

    May 31, 2015


Perfect kindness acts without thinking of kindness.
— Lao Tse