Ronald559

Thanks tigeraye. (doesn't know how to tag)

Thank you for your review it was actually helpful! Not that others aren't but what you point out is what I know is hurting my storytelling. I'm entering this into ...

Thanks! I thought some people might think that a house for a grave would be a little far fetched for a deal. I wanted to show with Mauricios knife, value. ...

No one can deny your passion but with your lyrical verse, it reads more like poetry. You need to make it easier on the reader if you want to write ...

Your title and your last statement are contradicting.

Thank you for your review. I realize sometimes I'm being vague. Lots of time I'm too vague that my reader doesn't get it. So its good to have you or ...

It didn't end the way I expected it to. Which is a good thing. I don't know where to start with what I think you need to fix. Other than ...

Thanks for reading.

I enjoyed that criticism because it reminds me that while I might have potential I can always be better. It's fairly old, this story, like 1 year old. I'll think ...

I enjoy your honesty. I actually didn't find it harsh, plus I think you ought to learn something from a review. I always try to cheer the person up afterward, ...

A quick reminder that in the end life is beautiful, and we all have something to be thankful for. This year I'm thankful to met have met someone very special, ...

I really like your reviews, and I find them helpful. Thank You.

I'm a little hesitant to share another chapter but I just might to see what you have to say. I revised this chapter recently and fixed some of the things ...

Can you reply to this, I want to review it later.

This reads more like a poem than a story. Largely because of the language you are using which is more poetic than descriptive. You could easily turn this into an ...