Young Writers Society

Hey there Roma here! Starting things off, the way this opens up is just awesome. Really captured my attention and drew me in. Made me feel like I was watching ...

Hello Roma here, I can see that this your first work, will done my friend. There really isn't move that I don't like so far. The way you describe Athena ...

Hello Roma here, Wow what a job well done, honesty that was really a good read. I usually don't read poems on here but I'm glad I read this. It ...

Hi Roma here, First off I have to start off by saying I love harry potter and anything to do with it, like a lot of others that posted here ...

Hey there... Well everyone else pretty much touched upon what I was going to say about this piece. The title is good and really captures you and makes you want ...

Roma here I was waiting for the second book and here it is. ^_^ You of course started it off with a bang as always. Per usually there's nothing that ...

Hey Lulu, Roma here ^_^ As usual you leave me wanting more. I love how you are switching between the past and the present, it gives the story that extra ...

Hey Lucrezia Roma here, As usual you never disappoint with your work. This piece was a good way to lead up to things to come. So don't worry about it ...

Hi Cheetah, Roma here First of let me start by saying I love the concept. The switching between their views was done flawlessly. However the only problem that I had ...

Hey Lucrezia, Roma here. First let me start off by saying I just read both of the previous chapters and I must say they are simply amazing. The second chapter ...

i just finished reading this and i have to say good job :) im a huge HP fan and i love what you did here. Yea like the others said ...