RokitaVivi

Not a long translation like in the previous in the prologue, but it's just one in German for this. Unnecessary? Debatable. But I'm putting it in here for sake of ...

Here are the translation notes for this chapter, it's mostly just French with one German. Keep in mind that some words are repeats from the previous part/chapter, but I put ...

Thank you for the snarky review, it was very amusing to read through and gave me a few laughs XD I mostly took creative liberty on some parts in this ...

Yeah, that's on me. The moment I published it and realize how long it was, I knew I mess up. I promise that if the next chapter and future ones ...

Hi Ravena, this is RokitaVivi speaking, I want to thank you for your review along with some thoughts and some helpful!! I want to get everything established in chapter 1, ...

Since this chapter has a lot of French and German, I made a handy dandy translation note to clear things up. Translation Notes: mein Sternlicht (German) - my starlight mon ...

Hiya, Rokita here! Thank you for the review and happy you thought the story was interesting, it helps a lot. I'll start off with the some errors, just to rip ...

So the "%uD83D%uDE05" was suppose to be emotes but I guess it didn't translate well. Just ignore that, that's one me.

Thank you for that wonderful review, I'm glad you like the story. I'll breakdown my thoughts for each section, maybe clear some things here and there. For the "Top Graham ...

Note: This story is heavily based on a dream I once had months ago.

The pleasures all mine, I do all I can to help. :D

Hi @Dossereana, I'd like to say thank you for your review. Don't worry you weren't being harsh, it's more of a constructive criticism and very helpful at that, not to ...

Thank you for the review and pointing out a grammatical error, but I'll edit it out as soon as I can (embarrassing on my part). The Slightly Burnt Marshmallow section ...

Please ignore this comment, I was playing with editing before publishing the story and made this little goof up.

Love this poem, it conveys a lot of feeling and doesn't beat around the bush in a short time frame. I actually felt bad for the melting ice cream as ...