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Re: Valen
For our hearts are as cold as ice that makes us hateful and yet sensual, For we are the fallen enemy who finds passion in your sweet blood, For there ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: I miss you
Here we met, The sun had already set. The air was romantic, and you were fantastic. I fell in love with you, Like two beautiful doves do. I gifted you ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Untitled no 1
Hi, when I read this poem i was totally dumbfounded. I now believe that i am stupid thankyou! When I went to read the reviews to see how other people ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Resurrection, Inversed
Hi, first of all I would like to say welcome to YWS. You reviewed one of my poems, so I decided that I would take a look at one of ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Ode to a Porch Swing
I liked this poem. I was confused by the last line but as i read down through your reviews I realised that it should read:- In the place i love ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Autumn Kissed
W O W. That was a very nice read. I liked it a lot. It made me feel kind of sad though. But I don't think that that is a ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Pancakes
This poem is short and fun. Somehow I don't hink that there is a deeper meaning to it....(than God)...:L Ha, I enjoyed it but I do think that the last ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Roma and Julius
Thats brilliant. Good idea having them as toys, it was a different aproach. The rhyming pattern was off in a few place but that is all the complaints which i ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Retaliation
I liked this a lot. :) It was too short, you should put more work into it and give it a proper ending, try and change the weather, or say ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Hunted: Part One
Hey. This piece caught my attention from the start, so this was a good thing because there is only a certain writing technique which can capture my attention. :) So ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: 'To Kill a Mockingbird'
I read "To Kill A Mocking Bird" for English last year. I absolutely loved this book. I think it made an impact on me. I had never really thought about ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
The book does have a symbolic meaning. It was written shortly after The Great War and showed how people can act when they are put in extreme conditions. It is ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Why The Boy Cried 'Wolf'!
Hello, I really enjoyed this script, and yes i did find it funny. It was a good idea to take the character known as 'the boy who called wolf' and ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: 101 Reasons
Hey there I liked this poem, but why is it called 101 reasons? I thought it was going to be much longer. And there was grammatical errors, but other than ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: I Held Time in my Hand
Hey Adrian I liked this poem alot...:D You did a nice job, i like the way you repeated the line 'i held time in my hand' by dong this it ...
Oct 21, 2008
