Young Writers Society

Hey there

I liked this poem, but why is it called 101 reasons?
I thought it was going to be much longer.
And there was grammatical errors, but other than that i liked it, it was free flowing.

The dreamy eyes,

that hold much meaning

in their depths.

Capture me with one gaze.



The timeless smile

that shines across your face.

Is too powerful,

irresistible.



That voice of yours,

so gentle and sweet,

holds my heart,

in it's harmonious grip.



Those little antics you do.

Your one-in-a-million personality.

The secrets you hold within.

All contribute to just who you are.



With all these reasons

and so much more.

Must you still ask,

Why I love you?

Wow, this is so awesome, you can feel the emotions, it is very good. There were a few grammar errors that I corrected, and the title was a little odd, just so you know. Keep up the good work.

Okay....it was interesting. Why is the title called 101 reasons? Have you ever seen the movie "10 Things I Hate About You"? I was expecting it to be more like Kat's poem. Other than that it was very good. It could use some more editing to make it a little bit more eye catching, but I didn't really find any major problems with it. Keep working on it!