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RobynTheWriter827

RobynTheWriter827

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mindset of the Media

    I really like these sort of poems with two completely different meaning depending on what way you read it. I tried to write one once, but completely failed. It is ...

    Mar 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: If I, Would You?

    I liked this poem, as it had a deep meaning behind it. It is a good question as I personally think people do see us differently depending on our outward ...

    Mar 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Deaths Grief

    These are just suggestions to improve your writing a bit. I like the repetition used, however, my obsession for correct grammar is telling me, 'Use an apostrophe in, ''At death's ...

    Mar 30, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: First the Rain

    I like the repetition with the lines 'Hard so hard' and 'Long so long'. It creates kind of a cool pattern. I'm really bad at analysing the deep meaning of ...

    Mar 30, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Teen Fiction Re: Being a Teenage Christian.

    I completely agree. As a Christian myself, this is all very relatable. Thankfully me and my friends don't get much hassle, as people don't really care that we go to ...

    Mar 30, 2018


We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind