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Re: Mindset of the Media
I really like these sort of poems with two completely different meaning depending on what way you read it. I tried to write one once, but completely failed. It is ...
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Re: If I, Would You?
I liked this poem, as it had a deep meaning behind it. It is a good question as I personally think people do see us differently depending on our outward ...
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Re: Deaths Grief
These are just suggestions to improve your writing a bit. I like the repetition used, however, my obsession for correct grammar is telling me, 'Use an apostrophe in, ''At death's ...
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Re: First the Rain
I like the repetition with the lines 'Hard so hard' and 'Long so long'. It creates kind of a cool pattern. I'm really bad at analysing the deep meaning of ...
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Re: Being a Teenage Christian.
I completely agree. As a Christian myself, this is all very relatable. Thankfully me and my friends don't get much hassle, as people don't really care that we go to ...
Mar 30, 2018
