RobbieFava

Let me just start off by saying that I really enjoyed this poem. I just had a couple of things to comment on. First, the rhythm in the first four ...

Wow. Let me just start by saying that this poem is fantastic. I am so glad that I read this because it touched me in ways I can't even fathom. ...

Woah! I was so not expecting that one! You have certainly put a giant twist here that I did not see coming at all! :D AWESOME! The only spelling error ...

Hey there! This story is eerie, to say the least. I'm already hooked, and we haven't even met the incubus yet. :P There's something so terrifying about a simple knocking ...

Oooh! I'm excited about this chapter. I feel like you have some good interpersonal relationships going on here between Scarlet and the other guards, and I'm terribly excited to meet ...