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RituparnaBhowmik

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1

    i separated them and republished, i hope that will instill some interest

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Encounter with Death

    thank you so much for this encouragement. i did the corrections as you all suggested and i am really bad at spellings and punctuation- so please do nitpick to let ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Encounter with Death

    thank you for the appreciation but i think you didn't really get what i wanted to mean. perhaps i have to explain it at the end in a bracket- you ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Encounter with Death

    thank you for the review and i would make corrections in this work as you suggest. however the tone in the first brackets in first stanza in meant to struck ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Fire and Ice[ the novel] chapter 3

    this review was a real help, thank you for the appreciation and for motivating me in my work. and English is my first language but not my mother tongue and ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    thank you for this review. i chose the title as it has a different significance- it is the long life journey portrayed through the course of a river, every experience ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    thank you so much and i would take care of these points in future...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    thank you so much for the appreciation... :D

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1

    no no this includes prologue 3 chapters...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1

    i know it cant be read in a single sitting... neither can any other novel be read in a single go as i suppose...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    no it is basically a poem and song is just a word which relates the poem to its life. the brackets explain her strong determination and in turn the moral ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    thank you...:D

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    thank you so much for this review, i made the correction and i lope this title suits better....

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Thoughts as he went further and further

    thank you for the appreciation, please read the previous reply to know the significance of " tear" and i want to keep the rage burning in and use it as ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Thoughts as he went further and further

    thank you for the positive comments and for the piece of advice. the poem's rhythm is bound to be noted and it is intentional- in the first half the poem ...

    Mar 12, 2015


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