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  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Storm

    Hello, Ripple here! First of all, I find lyrics to be the most difficult to review, simply because I'm missing the musical element. I'll try my best, though. Do you ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: That poor, poor carriage driver

    Hello, Ripple here again. I believe I also reviewed Four to Go today, so I have a bit of context, but I haven't read the other chapters yet. I'm liking ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Northeast: Chapter 2 [Second Draft]

    Hello! Ripple here on this magnificent Review Day! I must disclaim that I have not read the first chapter, and am bound to be confused at some plot points; bear ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Goblin Of Darkness, Chapter 4

    Hello! Ripple here. :D I haven't had the time to read through the rest of the story, as a disclaimer. As Cello has already covered grammar, I'll focus more on ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Four to go

    Hello! Ripple here to review on this fantastic review day. First of all, this feels a lot like the chapter of a story, and yet it seems like it's supposed ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Last Of The Unicorns Chapter 2

    Hello, Ripple here! I read the first chapter to make sure I wasn't missing anything, but it left me even more confused. What happened? Wasn't there a storm? While these ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Four- Chapter two

    Hello! Ripple here! Let's start the review then, shall we? Disclosure: I have not read Chapter 1, so I'm not filled in on all of the plot. The beginning feels ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The First Encounter

    Hello! Ripple here, ready to review. :D This definitely does feel like a prologue to a larger novel. I'd love to see where this story goes. Escape. That's what they ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Whomerlock: Chapter 8

    Hello! Ripple here. No day like Review Day to actually get around to reviewing this, eh? First off, I am absolutely loving this fanfic so far. However, this is one ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Being white is right?

    Hello! Ripple here for a ReviewDay GO! review. A rather short essay, but you make your point well. It feels fairly professional, yet the first person point of view makes ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Lost Boy

    Hello! Ripple here. :D Like Waffle said, it was fairly difficult to follow, despite having a more linear narrative than most poems. The description says that it is a true ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Makeup is a Mask

    Hello, Ripple here for my first Review day review. :D First off, this is a very interesting premise. I myself don't wear makeup most of the time, and yet your ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 18

    Hello! Ripple here, for the last time in Book 1. Let's review, shall we? Emerald evergreens were dappled all over the carpet of amber trees like stains in a tapestry. ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: When a Bird Sings chapter 1 pt. 1

    Hello! Ripple here. While, I'm not typically a huge fan of romance, this made me smile. :) They had met in the second semester of Cate's Junior year of high ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Delete

    Hello, Ripple here to review! So assuming that this was not a work that you decided to delete, the nothingness could be very powerful, with the only word that we ...

    Jun 26, 2016


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio