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Re: Deleted 11
This was haunting. And gorgeous. It was the type of poem that when you're done reading it, it sits there in your mind and you replay what you just read ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Catch a Falling Star
I liked how it was so deep. There really are a lot of emotions hidden behind your words. The only thing I would have a problem with is your rhyme ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Black Kisses
This was a twisted way to look at love. I really liked it. It wasn't just your average run of the mill, sappy, "Oh, I love you." love poems. It ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: The Twisted Lies of a Girl In Love. Part 1
I absolutely loved it! Please please please post more! I'm addicted already. Everything was beautiful, except for the fact that he was/is hitting her. Big no no, and if I ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Poem for school
Definately amazing. I love that book...Please don't ask why I read it, my teacher suggested it..haha. This was very original...and I loved your ryhme scheme. I think you deserve and ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: Love Bites!
As you broke my heart it fell to the floor . It crawled and wanted more , But you cant give a frown to let someone down . We used ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: I'll always be here!
Your heart is hallow , And I fallow where you go . I would know if you love me , Nothing in the world would let me know . Nothing ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: Bluffing - Chapter 1, 2 & 3
Your story is the most incredible thing I've read in forever! I can't believe you stopped! I got all misty eyed, feeling totally sympathetic for Sarah, like the weirdo I ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: In the Company of a Vampire : Prologue (edited)
Alice could only describe it as someone watching her from afar, like a guardian angel or some other deity .(I LOVE this first sentance.) Taking a look around the grand ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: The Way You Love Me
I really enjoyed this. I like how you kept it simple but yet it made me really think about it after I read it. All in all-simply amazing. Your begining ...
Sep 20, 2009
