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This is taking place in Korea, and they're korean names (this is technically a fanfic bc I'm using the members as BTS as the main characters, and they're korean lol) ...

you're fine! It's so weird for even me going back to read my old works, my punctuation needed a lot of work, and it still needs some fixes but it's ...

very truw with the first correcting, i overlooked it when editing lol, good eye! With dialougue, it think it's one of my weak points, I struggle with the formatting some ...

Looking forward to it ^^

Ok!

oh so just make a post on my wall or something with the link and @ you?

Great things that you pointed out! Tenses still get me from time to time, i notice when i write in the present i jump back, so for this book I ...

no problem! That's what we're here for on YWS, to help each other thrive as writers ^^

Thank you so much for your in depth review! You pointed out many important things that I will go through and edit! Your compliments are so kind! 7 chapters posted ...

Thank you so much! I will make a not and edit that :) What do you mean by tag you? it's literally been years since I've written and did things ...

Big point as well, I'm going to keep the identity of The Swan hidden until the end in a big reveal, I have the whole basic plotline and big events ...

I'm loving the interest and questions! Yes, it's like a book so things will be unfolded as the chapters are written and things will line up, so if you're interested, ...

you have so many questions and I love it! It's all being developed and I'm going to keep posting the chapters so you can keep up with it if you ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you so much for writing a review! I was honestly not trying too hard with this poem because, I just really want to write these things, but it would ...